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    Red face Could someone check my sentence please?

    Hi! Could someone check this sentence and make any necessary corrections please?


    In all of the work experience which I have undertaken, I have worked as a member of a team however I have also been responsible for self-direction, requiring organisation, commitment, planning and co-ordination skills For example, when working as a carer I was able to ensure that clients received the highest quality of care whist maintaining a fair distribution of tasks between myself and colleagues.


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    Default Re: Could someone check my sentence please?

    Quote Originally Posted by Robynne View Post
    Hi! Could someone check this sentence and make any necessary corrections please?


    In all of During the my extensive work experience, which I have undertaken, I have worked well as a member of a team. However, I have also been responsible for self-direction, worked on my own initiative requiring which requires organisation, commitment, planning and co-ordination skills. For example, when working as a carer I was able to ensure ensured that my clients received the highest quality of care whist maintaining a fair distribution of tasks between myself and my colleagues.


    Many thanks :)
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