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    NewHopeR is offline Senior Member
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    Default Please edit the sentence, which sounds a bit unnatural

    A 23-year-old female who was suffered from lung infection before began to feel severe burning upper abdominal pain 2 day ago without presentations of nausea, vomiting and diarrhea.

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    billmcd is offline Key Member
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    Default Re: Please edit the sentence, which sounds a bit unnatural

    Quote Originally Posted by NewHopeR View Post
    A 23-year-old female who was previously suffered from a lung infection, before began to feel severe, burning upper abdominal pain 2 days ago but without presentations of nausea, vomiting and or diarrhea.
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