Re: not so much that officials could steal a big sum
You're right, your version doesn't sound right. I think it's because "not so much that" is a standard phrase as used in the original sentence. Changing "that" to "to enable" doesn't work.
Nothing is enabling anything. It's just a statement of fact that there is a lot of money but there is not so much money that some of it going missing wouldn't be noticed.
Last edited by emsr2d2; 20-Jun-2012 at 15:05.
Reason: missing letter
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.