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    my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    Hello there! I am writing a poem (well I'm trying) and I don't know whether the following expression is correct: my heartbeat is tuned in /with your pace.
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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    In a poem, you can pretty much say anything you like.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    Quote Originally Posted by emsr2d2 View Post
    In a poem, you can pretty much say anything you like.
    True, but I find it difficult to make sense of this one. Anyway, we'd normally say "tuned to".
    (I'm guessing the object of affection is a race horse; as he runs faster, her heart beats faster in admiration.)

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    Quote Originally Posted by Raymott View Post
    (I'm guessing the object of affection is a race horse; as he runs faster, her heart beats faster in admiration.)
    I'm guessing it's Usain Bolt.

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    Juliana2, can you tell us in non-poetic words what you are trying to say?
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    I'm trying to show that someone is so much in love that his/her heart is beating according to his partner's heartbeat or in general, way of living

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    There is a conventional idiom for this - which may have originated in poety - 'two hearts beating as one'. A rather more prosaic term is 'synchronizing', but I don't suppose that would suit your context!

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    thank you

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    Re: my heartbeart is tuned in /with your pace.

    Quote Originally Posted by juliana2 View Post
    Thank you.
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