pls can you correct my letter? Thanks

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gabrielaelisabeth

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Thank youfor answering my letter .
Now, I am writingto know more about the accommodation. Next week I am travelling to Buenos Airesand I need one of the rooms you are renting.
Firstly, Iwould like to know what the address of the flat is. I have just finishedsecondary school and I am starting Psychology at the Buenos Aires University. Ihope it is near it because I will not have enough time for travelling a lot everyday.
Secondly,could you tell me how much the room costs. I need an affordable one. Would thatbe possible?
Finally, I´veseen there is a big kitchen in the building.Can I use it freely or I have topay for it?
Thank youin advance.
 

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You need to look at the spaces you leave between words. I am assuming this is a real-life situation so I have taken more liberties with your text than I normally would. If you are doing this as an exercise in self-study, I can keep closer to your own words.
Thank you for your response to my inquiry about accommodations in Buenos Aries. I have some additional questions:
1) What is the exact address
of the flat? I will be studying at Buenos Aires University and need to live fairly near the university.
2) What is the rent? Do you require a deposit?
3) I saw that there is a large kitchen in the building. Is use of this kitchen included in my rent? If not, is there an additional charge to use the kitchen?*


* This would be VERY unexpected where I live. Either you have the use of the kitchen or you don't, but paying extra to use it would be unusual.
 

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Thank youfor answering my letter .
[STRIKE]Now, I am writing [/STRIKE][STRIKE] I would liketo know more [/STRIKE] I would like some additional information about the accommodations. Next week I [STRIKE]am travelling [/STRIKE] will travel to Buenos Airesand and I[STRIKE] need[/STRIKE] would like to rent one of the rooms you [STRIKE]are renting[/STRIKE] have available.
First[STRIKE]ly[/STRIKE], Iwould like to know [STRIKE]what[/STRIKE] the address of the flat [STRIKE]is[/STRIKE]. I have just finished secondary school and I am starting Psychology at the Buenos Aires University. I hope[STRIKE] it [/STRIKE] the flat is nearby [STRIKE]it[/STRIKE] because I will not have enough time for travel [STRIKE]ing a lot [/STRIKE]everyday.
Second[STRIKE]ly[/STRIKE],[STRIKE] could you [/STRIKE][STRIKE]tell me how much the room costs[/STRIKE]what is the rental fee? I [STRIKE]need an affordable one[/STRIKE] am on a limited budget. [STRIKE]Would thatbe possible?[/STRIKE][STRIKE]
[/STRIKE]Finally, I´ve [STRIKE]seen[/STRIKE] noted there is a[STRIKE] big [/STRIKE] large kitchen in the building.[STRIKE]Can[/STRIKE] May I use it freely or [STRIKE]I have topay for it[/STRIKE] is there an additional fee for its use?
Thank youin advance.

As BarbD has posted, please get familiar with your space bar.
 
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