[Essay] a car wash

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Ashiuhto

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My brother works in a car wash. He washes and cleans cars for the guests. He works hard, and my family thinks he should get higher pay. But his boss won’t raise the pay for him. Why? His boss says, "If there is a high-end car, like Mercedes or BMW beside him, he will distract his attention and can't concentrate on working. So I don’t give him more pay.”
 

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My brother works in a car wash. He washes and cleans cars for the [STRIKE]guests[/STRIKE] customers. He works hard, and my family thinks he should get higher pay. But his boss won’t raise the pay for him. Why? His boss says, "If there is a high-end car, like a Mercedes or a BMW beside him, [STRIKE]he[/STRIKE] it will [STRIKE]distract[/STRIKE] attract his attention and [STRIKE]can't [/STRIKE] he won't be able to concentrate on his work[STRIKE]ing[/STRIKE]. So I won't [STRIKE]don’t[/STRIKE] give him [STRIKE]more[/STRIKE]higher pay.”

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