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    Ashiuhto is offline Senior Member
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    Default keep abreast of fashions

    Please check the following paragraph.

    Taipei is my favorite city, which is the capital of Taiwan. Walking on the street, you can see many people coming from different countries. Taipei seems to be an international metropolis. There are lots of department stores for shopping, and many restaurants for eating everywhere. Furthermore, it has advanced transportation systems for residents conveniently to go anywhere. This is a great place and I can keep abreast of fashions when I am in the city. I really love to go there, and it is the best city in my mind.

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    Default Re: keep abreast of fashions

    I read it but did not see mistakes, but perhaps:

    Taipei is my favorite city, which is the capital of Taiwan

    Should be:

    Taipei, which is the capital of Taiwan, is my favorite city.

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    Default Re: keep abreast of fashions

    Quote Originally Posted by Ashiuhto View Post
    Please check the following paragraph.

    Taipei, which is the capital of Taiwan, is my favorite city. Walking on the street, you can see many people coming from different countries. Taipei seems to be an international metropolis. There are lots of department stores for shopping, and many restaurants for eating everywhere. Furthermore, it has advanced transportation systems for residents so that they can conveniently to go anywhere. This It is a great place and I can keep abreast of fashions when I am in the city. I really love to go there. To my mind, Taipei it is the best city in my mind.
    See above.
    Please note that I'm not a teacher.

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