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    We went to chesapeake, Virginia this summer. The first place that we went was Chesapeake Bay Bridge Tunnel. While we were driving on the bridge, it look amazing outside. when we finished hangout at the bridge, we went to the beach and swam for a little while. My parent told me to go back to the shallow area when I almost slumped. At last, we went to hiking.

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    Quote Originally Posted by sclark7 View Post
    We went to chesapeake, Virginia this summer. The first place that we went was Chesapeake Bay Bridge Tunnel. While we were driving on the bridge, it look amazing outside. when we finished hangout at the bridge, we went to the beach and swam for a little while. My parent told me to go back to the shallow area when I almost slumped. At last, we went to hiking.

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    Default Re: how can I correct essay error?

    We went to Chesapeake, Virginia this summer. The first place that we went was Chesapeake Bay Bridge Tunnel. While we were driving on the bridge, it looked amazing outside the car. After we finished hungout at the bridge, we went to the beach and swam for a little while. My parents told me to go back to the shallow area when I was almost slumped. At last, we went to hike.

    It is not the homework, I am self-learning English.

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