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    joelamoule is offline Newbie
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    Question Could you correct my Resume please :)

    Hi everybody,

    My name is Gael and I'm french,

    I'm curently in last year of engeneering school, and i would like to apply for internship in UK,
    I try to do a Resume, but i am sure there are some mistakes inside,

    Could you help me to correct it,

    Here is the link to upload my resume (put www before link :) ) : fichier-pdf.fr/2012/07/19/english-resume/
    (under TÚlÚcharger English_Resume.pdf is the box to enter pasword)

    Pasword is: gael1990


    Thanks in advance,

    Gael

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    School Assists is offline Newbie
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    Default Re: Could you correct my Resume please :)

    Hi

    I'm an expert offering writing and editing services. I just saw your resume and I feel that it is rather short and blunt. Adding a catchy objective conveying your interest is important. Also, it is not professional to say references will be provided on request. It will annoy an employer. You should also add awards if any obtained and voluntary activities taken part in.

    Hope it helps

    Mauleen Fey
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