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    please help edit my personal statement.

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    Last edited by tyav007; 23-Jul-2012 at 14:27.

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    Re: please help edit my personal statement.

    Quote Originally Posted by tyav007 View Post
    Please I need my personal statement for the PRESSID scholarship edited. Thanks.

    Focus: why u want to study overseas, why u wish to obtain the qualification and ur chosen research area, and ********Hw u think u’ll benefit in terms of ur career n personal development from obtaining this scholarship and the resulting qualification once uhave returned to ur home country.

    I do not believe for one second that the scholarship paperwork used the words as you have typed them above as the focus. I have marked in red the non-standard English. If that is how the institution you are applying to writes, then I suggest you steer well clear of them and get a scholarship somewhere where they speak good English.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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