Re: please help edit my personal statement.
I do not believe for one second that the scholarship paperwork used the words as you have typed them above as the focus. I have marked in red the non-standard English. If that is how the institution you are applying to writes, then I suggest you steer well clear of them and get a scholarship somewhere where they speak good English.
Originally Posted by tyav007
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.