Thank you for your time looking through this letter! Now I see what she meant... It's not that horrible but OK. It's a little bit funny because she didn't focus on my skills and experience, she literally wrote "Your letter is full of grammatical errors". So typical for HR Managers... :) And I applied for data analysis job and writing skills are not in the first plan.
But what do you suggest, how can I improve my writing skills? Should I take writing course or something?
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