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    Please, please, I need your help, correct my letter!!!!

    I will really apreciate if somebody would read and correct my letter to Home Office, as this is very important for me and I would like that is correct and formal write.


    Dear Sir/Madam

    A few months ago I realised that I have lost my passport with my residence card on it, as a family member of a EEA. I had reported the loss of my residence card to the UKBA, also to the local police station from which the reference number is VBXXXX. With all of this in place I have applied to new passport from my consulate.

    I have also asked by phone to your office about which form should I fill, so I have been told by one of your collegues that I should fill the TOC form as I have a photocopy of my passport and my residence card on it.

    However, In support of this application, I enclose the following:

    Completed TOC form with photograph
    Passport
    Xxx
    Xx

    I hope that all this documentation will help with my application.

    Yours faithfully

    Susana0600

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    Re: Please, please, I need your help, correct my letter!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by Susana0600 View Post

    Dear Sir/Madam

    A few months ago I realised that I had lost my passport with my residence card on it, as a family member of an EEA. I had reported the loss of my residence card to the UKBA, also to the local police station from which the reference number is VBXXXX. With all of this in place I have applied for a new passport from my consulate.

    I have also asked by phone to your office about which form should I fill in, so I have been told by one of your colleagues that I should fill in the TOC form as I have a photocopy of my passport and my residence card on it.

    However, In support of this application, I enclose the following:

    Completed TOC form with photograph
    Passport
    Xxx
    Xx

    I hope that all this documentation will help with my application.

    Yours faithfully

    Susana0600
    I hope this is in time, Susana, as I can see you posted it some days ago.

    If you have already sent it off, don't worry – there are no major mistakes in it.

    I was puzzled to read you were enclosing your passport. You started off by saying you had lost your passport.

    Rover

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