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    Question News Headline

    Hello!

    I am writing a mag article regarding my school's exam results and hence need a catchy headline; i thought this one ''Brilliance Unleashed''

    Is it a good one? And can you suggest a better one??

    Secondly, I have written the article but not too satisfied with the starting! Can you suggest a good way to give it a great start??? :)

    Thank you in advance!

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    Default Re: News Headline

    I would say exceptional teaching my "unleash" brilliance, but exam results "demonstrate" or "display" brilliance.

    The results are in!
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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