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    If you find any mistkaes , can you correct them?

    1. she works as a teacher of the extracurricular activity for middle school children.

    2. she goes to work in Ann Arbour on Fridays.

    3. Her family consists of four people:a mother, a father, a younger sister and her.

    4.she lives near the campus, so it just takes 10 minutes for her to come to class on foot.

    5.she spends her free time relaxing and watchig TV.

    lastly, what does it mean by days.

    those sleepless nights and restless days... here does days mean the opposite of night or what else?

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    Quote Originally Posted by bosunyum
    If you find any mistkaes , can you correct them?
    1. she works as a teacher of the extracurricular activity for middle school children.
    2. she goes to work in Ann Arbour on Fridays.
    3. Her family consists of four people:a mother, a father, a younger sister and her.
    4.she lives near the campus, so it just takes 10 minutes for her to come to class on foot.
    5.she spends her free time relaxing and watchig TV.
    lastly, what does it mean by days.
    those sleepless nights and restless days... here does days mean the opposite of night or what else?
    This is one that I have found
    3.Her family consists out of four people ....

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    Can anybody give me second opinion?

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    1- for extra-curricular activities
    3- I'd use a personal adjectives
    Does it refer to parents of new-born children?

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