Re: Could you check this review, please!
See above for my suggestions. I don't know what the magazine is looking for but you may wish to give specific examples of things like how the main character's sister was well played, what is poignant and disturbing about the films, a little more of the plot of Fish Tank than just a girl being brought up in a low-class family.
Originally Posted by leszkoss
You don't need to say that something stars actor Michael Fassbender. Usually, the star of a film is an actor. I would only specify if they were something else ie "The film stars pop singer Madonna".
Try to avoid weak words like "nice" in pieces like this. What exactly is a "nice soundtrack"? It doesn't tell the reader anything at all. Was it music that particularly fitted each scene? Was it beautifully crafted? Did it use unusual instruments? Was it the kind of soundtrack that you would buy and listen to separately, when not watching the film?
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.