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    Smile What do You think of my grammar? THANK YOU!

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    Default Re: What do You think of my grammar? THANK YOU!

    Thank YOU, Gillnetter!

    It was very helpful!

    I wish You a great success!

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    I'd love to hear Your opinions!

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    Default Re: What do You think of my grammar? THANK YOU!

    Hi wishsuccess4u. This appears to be cross-posted at http://www.usingenglish.com/forum/ed...tml#post917268

    I offered some thoughts for you there. Good luck!
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