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    Can you help me to correct any error in the paragraph?
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    Just a suggestion for the time card submission.
    
    After a contractor submitting the weekly time, if the system can alert the approver immediately and 
    periodically until he finishes it, that would be great.
    
    Sometimes the approver 
    forgets it. 
    
    It happens to me a few times and for last week. It is still not approved.
    
    I think that the system can be improved.
    Thanks.

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    Default Re: About the paragraph

    Quote Originally Posted by ardmore View Post
    Can you help me to correct any error in the paragraph?
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    Just a suggestion for the time card submission.
    
    After a contractor submitting the weekly time, if the system can alert the approver immediately and 
    periodically until he finishes it, that would be great.
    
    Sometimes the approver 
    forgets it. 
    
    It happens to me a few times and for last week. It is still not approved.
    
    I think that the system can be improved.
    Thanks.
    I'm afraid it doesn't make sense to me.

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    Quote Originally Posted by ardmore View Post
    Can you help me to correct any error in the paragraph?
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    Just a suggestion for the time card submission.
    
    After a  contractors submitting the  have submitted their weekly time, I would appreciate it if  the system can could alert the approver immediately and 
    periodically until he finishes  approves it. that would be great.
    
    Sometimes the approver forgets it. 
    
    It has happened to me a few times and for  since last week, and It the time is still not approved.
    
    I think that the system can be improved.
    Thanks.
    b.

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