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ardmore

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Just a suggestion for the time card submission.

After a contractor submitting the weekly time, if the system can alert the approver immediately and 
periodically until he finishes it, that would be great.

Sometimes the approver 
forgets it. 

It happens to me a few times and for last week. It is still not approved.

I think that the system can be improved.

Thanks.
 

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Can you help me to correct any error in the paragraph?
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Just a suggestion for the time card submission.

After a contractor submitting the weekly time, if the system can alert the approver immediately and 
periodically until he finishes it, that would be great.

Sometimes the approver 
forgets it. 

It happens to me a few times and for last week. It is still not approved.

I think that the system can be improved.

Thanks.

I'm afraid it doesn't make sense to me.
 

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Can you help me to correct any error in the paragraph?
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Just a suggestion for the time card submission.

After[STRIKE] a [/STRIKE] contractor[B][COLOR=#b22222]s[/COLOR][/B] [STRIKE]submitting the [/STRIKE][B][COLOR=#b22222] have submitted their [/COLOR][/B]weekly time, [B][COLOR=#b22222]I would appreciate it [/COLOR][/B]if  the system [STRIKE]can[/STRIKE] [B][COLOR=#b22222]could[/COLOR][/B] alert the approver immediately and 
periodically until he[STRIKE] finishes [/STRIKE] [B][COLOR=#b22222]approves[/COLOR][/B] it. [STRIKE]that would be great.[/STRIKE]

Sometimes the approver forgets it. 

It[B][COLOR=#b22222] has happened [/COLOR][/B]to me a few times [STRIKE][COLOR=#000000]and for [/COLOR][/STRIKE] [B][COLOR=#b22222]since[/COLOR][/B] last week, [COLOR=#b22222]and[/COLOR] [STRIKE]It[/STRIKE] [B][COLOR=#b22222]the time [/COLOR][/B]is still not approved.

I think that the system can be improved.

Thanks.

b.
 

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