Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph for me? Thanks for your help.
I saw a movie about a giant gorilla. A young woman was the gorilla’s friend. Because the animals couldn’t board an airplane, she took the gorilla by the airplane to America furtively. The gorilla was found and sent to a special zoo. He didn’t like the zoo. At that time, there were some hunters trying to kill him. Then, he escaped from the zoo and ran away continuously. Finally, the woman found him and stopped the killing and saved the gorilla.
I saw a movie about a giant gorilla. A young woman was the gorilla’s friend. Because the animals couldn’t board an airplane, she took the gorilla by the airplane to America furtively. The gorilla was found and sent to a special zoo. He didn’t like the zoo. At that time, there were some hunters trying to kill him. Then, he escaped from the zoo and ran away continuously. Finally, the woman found him and stopped the killing and saved the gorilla.