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    #1

    Please correct this

    Hello,

    I am Avinash.I'm from India.I completed my graduation.But I'm very poor in English and hence I want to learn English for a better career.I should have done this few years ago.Any way better late than never, I started trying to overcome my drawbacks now.I came to know about this forum through a friend of mine.I've been observing various threads since two weeks and liked it a lot.I think this is the forum I need to improve my language.There are many native speakers and teachers in this forum.I will start posting about my doubts and I hope I will have a good time here.


    Please correct the above paragraph.

    Thank you.

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    #2

    Re: Please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by Avinashh View Post
    Hello,

    I am Avinash.I'm from India.I completed my graduation have graduated from (high school/college/university}.But I'm very poor in English and hence I want to learn improve my English for a better career. I should have done this a few years ago. Anyway, better late than never, I started am trying to overcome my drawbacks now. I came to know about this forum through a friend of mine.I've been observing various threads since for two weeks and liked it a lot. I think this is the forum I need to improve my language.There are many native speakers and teachers in this forum. I will start posting about my doubts and I hope I will have a good time here.


    Please correct the above paragraph.

    Thank you.
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    #3

    Thumbs up Re: Please correct this

    Hello, friend,
    I would like to inform your grammatical mistake about using two words with preposition 'to' as you wrote in the passage ( I started trying so you should use to between two verb oky). and furthermore use capital letter before starting the new sentance. Thanks.

    Best Reagars,

    wasim raja

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    Pakistan

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    #4

    Re: Please correct this

    Quote Originally Posted by Wasim Raja View Post
    Hello, friend,
    I would like to inform your grammatical mistake about using two words with preposition 'to' as you wrote in the passage ( I started trying so you should use to between two verb oky). and furthermore use capital letter before starting the new sentance. Thanks.

    Best Reagars,

    wasim raja

    from

    Pakistan
    Could you please highlight the part you are mentioning?
    I used capital letters where ever it is necessary.

    Please highlight the mistakes. :)

    Thank you.

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