Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Would anyone be kind enough to check the paragraph for me? Thanks for your help.
One day, three children went mountain climbing together. They had to walk for a long time to arrive at their destination. As they took a momentary break on the way, the boy in a blue and white shirt saw three strange disc-shaped flying objects with flickering light flying high up in the sky. He pointed at them and said in a shrill voice, “Look, everybody! They are UFOs.” They were absorbed in watching the UFOs. Then, the boy took out his camera from his green bag quickly and wanted to take pictures of the UFOs. In a very short while, the UFOs disappeared into the sky. The three children were all disappointed.
One day, three children went mountain climbing together. They had to walk for a long time to arrive at their destination. As they took a momentary break on the way, the boy in a blue and white shirt saw three strange disc-shaped flying objects with flickering light flying high up in the sky. He pointed at them and said in a shrill voice, “Look, everybody! They are UFOs.” They were absorbed in watching the UFOs. Then, the boy took out his camera from his green bag quickly and wanted to take pictures of the UFOs. In a very short while, the UFOs disappeared into the sky. The three children were all disappointed.