b.Please help me check a memo in terms of diction, sentence structures and language style. Thank you.
To: All staff
From: Liu Yueyue
Date: September 19
Subject: A trip to Thailand
The total net profit
sof our company havehas increased by 40% in the third quarter compared with the profit sin last quarter. ExcitedExciting news for all. I hereby showoffer my sincere thanks to you for all you have done.
Obviously, it can not be denied that it is your creativity,
positivitypositive attitude and initiative, our companythat make our company tops in this industry and that it is your great effort and precious time that yield good profits.
To return your
paycontribution, I suggest a free five-day trip to Thailand including transportation, accommodations, meals, and round-trip international airplane ticket. If you have any questions, please contact my assistant at 18971393955.