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    Post IELTS, please correct my letter.

    You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may distrub your neighbour.
    Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter

    • Introduce yourself
    • describe your paln for the party
    • invite your neighbour to come



    Dear Sir / Madam,



    As your neighbor across the street, I would like to introduce myself: My name is Shahid, i am from Pakistan and working as an Accountant in Dubai since two months. I just moved to your neighbors last week in House # 129-B because it is
    near to my office and heart of the city.



    I am planning to hold a party on this weekend at my home. As this may, give us a chance to meet and get know each other. So i would like to invite you to my party and few of my colleagues are also coming. We would love have you on
    party.



    I am worried that noise may disturb someone in neighbor. So, i wanted to give you courtesy of informing you that there would be a bit of party-related noise as there will be a dj and music apart from dinner. But if you have any problem or concerns, just let me know I will be glad to help out.



    Looking forward to see you.

    Best Wishes

    Shahid
    Last edited by shahidrasheed153; 28-Sep-2012 at 18:18.

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