Describe a success you have had. You should say: what it was and when it happened why you chose this area of activity how easy or difficult it was to achieve * and explain how important this success was
My topic is describe success I had. I won 2nd place in singing competition a year ago.
back. I hadalways had a passion to become a singer. I always rushed to participate seek participationin any of my schools or youth festival’s singing competitions. But I always failed to clear qualification stages. There was a talent hunt competition organized by “times of India” in my city. Dragging along with numerous failures I opted to give ait a shot at it. Every time I used to compete with willingness to win but this time I took it lightly. This time I was much more relaxed during the qualifying rounds. To my shock I got selected for the finals which were supposed to be held a week later. Qualifying among hundreds of singers gave confidence; I practiced something like 12 hours a day for the final competition. It gave me new hope to fulfill my passion to sing. Singing in front of a large audience made me wasvery nervous but it was a very exciting experience for me. I won second price which is my most cherished success of all time. Achieving it was a very difficult time and the road of thisto success had lot of initialbumps. Loss of confidence and emotional setbacks were really hard to deal inwith. I am never scared of a situation in my life. I don't give up easily or think of quitting difficult work. Today in my life I am never scared of any worst situation of life. I don’t give up easily or neither think of quitting any difficult work.Success truly changes life.
A few recommended changes.
I've refrained from changing the complete structure of your sentences, there are a lot of sentences that you could merge. However I feel you will be more able to understand it in it's current format than a complete change.