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    Unhappy need help

    some times when i am writing i have trouble with describing things or using the right vocab how can i get passed that step

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    Re: need help

    The easiest thing would be if you gave us a sample to look at- could you put a paragraph or a few sentences up as an example? That way, we can coment on the real language you're using.


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    Re: need help

    Nary was walking down a road in the middle of the night trying to find her way back home, but she could not. it was too dark to see a thing and the rain was very thick to see throw. She sat down under a tree waiting for the storm to end as she closed her eyes and fell asleep.

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    Re: need help

    Ok:
    Throw- this should be 'through' and I would say 'too thick to see through'- we don't use very + adjective + infinitive much
    as she closed her eyes- how about 'then' as it's the next thing

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