english cv's mistakes

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Mimzat

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Hi
Looking for a job I have writed an english CV.
But I don't speak very well english and I need help by correcting my english CV.
Please, for helping me,you have below the CV:

Adele SBIP
Home adress : Rue Edgar Faure
Dijon/France
Phone number:00 00 00 00 00
Date of birth : YY/YY/YYYY
E-mail :mad:yahoo.fr

Profil: Dynamic, motivated and reliable professional with a background in business management, territorial development and relationship,and expertise in management control,relationship and project management. Currently looking for opportunities to utilise existing skills.
Education
2011 – 2012 : Postgraduate degree following my master(Bac +6), Universities of Agrosup Dijon and
Agroparitech, France

Mastère spécialisé en action publique pour le développement durable des territoires et
l’agriculture(ACTERRA)
Option :Rural development and agriculture (Agriculture et développement rural)

2006 – 2009 : Postgraduate degree following my master(Bac+5), University of Cheikh Anta Diop in Dakar,
Senegal

Diplôme d'Etudes Supérieures en Commerce, Administration et Finance (DESCAF)

2006 – 2004 : Marketing 2 years technical degree , University of Cheikh Anta Diop in Dakar, Senegal

2004 : High School Diploma(Science)
Série : S1 au Lycée Djignabo in Ziguinchor, Senegal

Professional Expérience:
September 2011 - June 2012 :Training course, Fédération Nationale des Cuma(Fn Cuma), France
Advanced skills in Project évaluation

November 2010 - April 2011: Temporary Capex and Costing analyst, Operations finance,Philip Morris Manufacturing, Senegal
Advanced skills in management control: US GAP accounting, costing analysis, capital expenses analysis and rolling forecast

January 2010 - November 2010 : Placement,Agrophytex S.A,Senegal
Good knoledge of development programs and development projects, prospection and negociation and advanced skills in agriculture projects,stocks management and marketing

June 2008 - Décember 2009 : Temporary, Agence client en ligne(Hot line office), Orange-Senegal, Senegal
Advanced skills in «relation client»

August 2007 - September 2007 : Placement, Administrative and Accoounting direction , Agence Senegalaise d’Electrification Rurale (Senegalese Agencie of Rural electrification) (ASER), Senegal
Good knolegde of public finance, Advanced skills in rural development

Septembre 2006 : Training course, Commercial départment, Fondation Trade Point, Senegal
Good knoledge of public structure, Ability to identity and to propose upportunities

Septembre 2005 : Placement, Général accounting Director,CBAO(Compagnie bancaire de l’Afrique de l’Ouest)
Ability of working in professionnal structure, good knoledge of the big structure fonctionment

Professional skills :
• Languages : French, native tongue
English, intermédiate level

• Computer Science : Windows, linux and mac environments
Sofwares : Saari, MS Project, Tompro, Delta, Spad, file maker pro
Hobbies
Musique, Basket ball, Social activities,


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Gillnetter

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Before continuing on, I will point out that it is an absolute waste of time and effort on your part to use French in a document meant to be read by an English speaker. Except for the names of the various schools you have attended, use English terms if you want to obtain a position at an English speaking company.
 
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