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    nelinda is offline Newbie
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    Post is my grammar that i used is correct?

    Last Saturday, we celebrated Andi's Birthday at Kidzville Podium. It was a fun day. Everybody is in the mood to party, especially the children. the place is so crowded, but everything is fine. You hard laughing of the children,parents and a loud sound coming from the sound system.

    During the games everybody was participated. I can see the smile at their faces, especially to Andi.
    She was so happy, she sing and dance that day. she was cool.

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    Re: is my grammar that i used is correct?

    Quote Originally Posted by nelinda View Post
    Last Saturday, we celebrated Andi's Birthday at Kidzville Podium. It was a fun day. Everybody is was in the mood to party, especially the children. the place is was so crowded, but everything is was fine. You hard heard the laughing of the children, parents and a loud sound coming from the sound system.

    During the games, everybody was participated. I can could see the smile at on their faces, especially to onAndi's.
    She was so happy, she sing sang and dance danced that day. She was cool.
    "is" refers to the present - It is raining. "was" refers to the past - It was raining yesterday. The party happened in the past, so "is" cannot be used here - use "was". Similar to this is your usage of "can". I can see now, I could see yesterday.

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    nelinda is offline Newbie
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    Re: is my grammar that i used is correct?

    Hi, Thank you for correcting my grammar.

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