Re: A more elegant way of saying...?
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Originally Posted by mariatesman
It's almost always redundant to have "why" and "the reason" in the same sentence.
The reason I wish to study law is...
I want to study law because...
Resolving injustice facing the immigrant community is why I want to study law.
Please write your whole sentence. It will be easier to comment that way.
I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.