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    Sentenses

    Hi,

    please assist, Are the below sentenses are corrected?

    He or she is a thief.
    My Pupils as well as i am doing this work.
    One of the cats scratch the children.

    Regards,

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    Re: Sentenses

    The first is okay.

    The second has two errors of capitalization and used the wrong form of the verb. Some may also say it has two errors of punctuation.

    The third uses the wrong tense.
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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    Re: Sentenses

    Quote Originally Posted by sftaa View Post
    Hi,

    please assist, Are the below sentenses are corrected?

    He or she is a thief.
    My Pupils as well as i am doing this work.
    One of the cats scratch the children.

    Regards,

    ....and it's spelled "sentences", not "sentenses".
    I'm not a teacher of English, but I have spoken it for (almost) all of my life....

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    Re: Sentenses

    Quote Originally Posted by sftaa View Post
    Hi,

    Please assist. Are the below sentences are corrected?

    He or she is a thief. OK.
    My pupils as well as (I consider use of "as well as" rather awkward or clumsy in this context. Why not a simple "and"?)I am are doing this work.
    One of the cats scratched the children.

    Regards,
    b.

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