In addition, if we have not enough free time when are we going to spend our money?
(CPE Sample script)
I'm reading through a few CPE sample scripts. They are not supposed to be examples of "perfect" English, so I'm trying to find ways in which some sentences can be improved. I would rewrite the sentence the following way:
In addition, if we don't have enough free time, when are we going to spend our money?
Do you agree with this? Do we need that second comma in this sentence?
Thank you in advance.