GilHello? I need your help. I submitted my application to my adorable ("adorable" refers to someone or something that you love, not a school) University. But, I am
worryingworried about my references. They were sent directly to the admission office. So, I need to make sure that the admission officer know that these references belong to me. I wrote a letter but I feel it is not good enough. Can you revise it for me? Please? Thank you very much for helping millions of people:)
Here is my letter:
Sirs/MadamsSir or Madam (Though, I would use: Attn: Admission Officer)
I am, Dee P, registration number 99999,
am willingI wish to pursue my Masters in Finance at prestigious XYZyour school.
have only eyes for accepting XYZ and worrying aboutam concerned if my reference letters handedarrived in righttime and accompany
accompanied my application. Two of my previous professors provided me
areference letters and sent them directly to XYZ Admissionthe admissions office.
I have just realized that there is a possibility
forthat my references coulddid not state my name clearly. Therefore, I would like to make sure ifthat my references were accompany accompanied by my application.
One of my references was sent by Mr. X, President of UB Toastmaster International, and a lecturer at LLL. The other one was sent by Mrs. Y, a lecturer at LLL
Is it possible for you to check if my references
considered for mearrived and are being considered?
I am looking forward hearing from you.
Thank you very much for your time.