Can you read my sentences and tell me what is wrong?

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haha27

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Hello? I wrote some sentences and I am not sure I did right. It would be great if you guys could tell me what I did wrong. Thank you!! :)



Korea Education Association found out a best way that can solve. It was to watch science movies and history programs because the programs and movies make children interested in difficult fields like science and history.
 

Gillnetter

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Hello? I wrote some sentences and I am not sure I did right. It would be great if you guys could tell me what I did wrong. Thank you!! :)



The Korea Education Association found out [STRIKE]a [/STRIKE] the best way [STRIKE]that can[/STRIKE] to solve (What?). It was to watch (maybe "show". The Association probably didn't watch the movies, they showed the movies) science movies and history programs because the programs and movies make children interested in difficult fields like science and history.
The first sentence needs something at the end to show what was solved.
 
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