Re: Need help im a homeschooler and i have never wrote a essay before
Welcome to the forum. For a first attempt, that is pretty good. Well done. I have made a few amendments above, marked in red. Take care with your punctuation - not only did I add some commas in the essay but your final sentence (this is my first attempt) was not capitalised and did not end with a punctuation mark.
Originally Posted by J hudson
Your title also had some errors. You wrote: Need help im a homeschooler and i have never wrote a essay before
It should be "I need help. I'm a homeschooler and I have never written an essay before".
Remember that we always capitalise the word "I" (first person singular).
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.