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    Explain the impact of having a cell phone as a teenager

    Explain the impact of having a cell phone as ateenager
    I. Introduction
    Thesis Statement: Cell phone use canadversely affect teen driving.

    II. Body

    A. Frequency of cell phoneuse among teens

    1. Texting
    2. Calling
    3. Emailing


    B. Cell phone use ruins teen’s health
    1. Ear problem
    2. Heart problem
    3. Eye problem

    C. Cell phone use destroysteens and uses their time

    1. Car accidents
    2. Games
    3. Improper sleep
    III. Teenagers have to be more careful withcell phones and use them wisely.
    Last edited by ally199212; 25-Oct-2012 at 19:41. Reason: I wanna know if the outline is correct? I need to know as soon as possible... my outline is due in 3 hours

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    Re: Explain the impact of having a cell phone as a teenager

    Welcome to the forum, Ally.

    We like to help when we can, but we don't help with homework assignments. Your teachers want to know what you can do, not what we can.

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    Re: Explain the impact of having a cell phone as a teenager

    I agree with 5jj, but want to ask you one question. Do your body paragraphs support your thesis statement?
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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