Explain the impact of having a cell phone as a teenager

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ally199212

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Explain the impact of having a cell phone as ateenager
I. Introduction
Thesis Statement: Cell phone use canadversely affect teen driving.

II. Body

A. Frequency of cell phoneuse among teens

1. Texting
2. Calling
3. Emailing


B. Cell phone use ruins teen’s health
1. Ear problem
2. Heart problem
3. Eye problem

C. Cell phone use destroysteens and uses their time

1. Car accidents
2. Games
3. Improper sleep
III. Teenagers have to be more careful withcell phones and use them wisely.
 
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Welcome to the forum, Ally. :hi:

We like to help when we can, but we don't help with homework assignments. Your teachers want to know what you can do, not what we can.
 

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I agree with 5jj, but want to ask you one question. Do your body paragraphs support your thesis statement?
 
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