Re: Is there a better way to say this?
Your formatting is a little odd. Many of the spaces between words were missing (I have corrected them). If you copy and paste again, check your text after you post it and go back and edit it to put the spaces back in if necessary.
Originally Posted by haha27
There are several issues with the piece, mainly with articles and singular/plural use. I have made various amendments to the whole piece in red above.
Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.