[Grammar] Farewell message

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stonehenge

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I'd like to write a farewell email to my colleageus on the last day at my job before starting my new job. Can you pleae review the below message and let me know if it looks good or if there is room for improvement.

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Today is my last day at <firm name> after 2 significant years of service in the <xyz> program. While working in <abc> technology group I gained several new professional skills, which I'll treasure. I'd like to thank you all for your support, guidance, encouragement and mentoring. I wish all of you success and stay in touch.

Regards,
My name
My email id
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Tdol

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It looks good. I would say and do stay in touch.
 
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