Attempting to infer a sense of nakedness and exposure
In this piece of writing, I'm trying to in infer a strong sense of nakedness/exposure, given by the darkness.
The feeling that you get when it's so dark you feel lost.
Does this sentence give a good representation?
The presence of the darkness pressing in, giving me a strong sense of self-awareness and naked exposure.
I'm not a teacher yet, but I am studying a Bachelor of Education with an English Literature major at Charles Sturt University, in NSW, Australia.