HanibalII
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Hi all.
In this piece of writing, I'm trying to in infer a strong sense of nakedness/exposure, given by the darkness.
The feeling that you get when it's so dark you feel lost.
Does this sentence give a good representation?
Cheers
In this piece of writing, I'm trying to in infer a strong sense of nakedness/exposure, given by the darkness.
The feeling that you get when it's so dark you feel lost.
The presence of the darkness pressing in, giving me a strong sense of self-awareness and naked exposure.
Does this sentence give a good representation?
Cheers