Ashiuhto
Senior Member
- Joined
- Nov 30, 2010
- Member Type
- English Teacher
- Native Language
- Chinese
- Home Country
- Taiwan
- Current Location
- Taiwan
Would anyone be kind enough to check the following paragraph for me? Thanks!
As time goes by, the food culture has obviously changed. Fast food has replaced eating three meals at home, and McDonald has become indispensable in our life. No matter kids, teenagers or workers, all love the dining in McDonald. At fast food kingdom, the competition is fierce among the fast-food restaurants. Why McDonald be the top in many fast food restaurant, and get “The king of fast food” title? Then I will investigate the factors in McDonald’s success.
As time goes by, the food culture has obviously changed. Fast food has replaced eating three meals at home, and McDonald has become indispensable in our life. No matter kids, teenagers or workers, all love the dining in McDonald. At fast food kingdom, the competition is fierce among the fast-food restaurants. Why McDonald be the top in many fast food restaurant, and get “The king of fast food” title? Then I will investigate the factors in McDonald’s success.
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