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    Question what is the right?

    where is the mistake in this clause and what is the right
    Do not be so happy to be less sad, then you
    will not be nervous and will be stretched (relax)
    and so you will play guitar well

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    Default Re: what is the right?

    There are various mistakes- the first part is contradictory and doesn't make much sense.

    then you will not be nervous and will be relaxed, and so you will play the guitar well

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    Default Re: what is the right?

    ok than kyou
    so what is the correct in the first part

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    Default Re: what is the right?

    It doesn't make sense, so it's hard to say what it should be- which is more important: being happy or sad?

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