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    ddablo is offline Junior Member
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    Default Please make a correction~

    Hi guys~
    Please make a correction when you see something wrong in this writing.

    Hwaseong city is located on the southwest coast of Gyeonggi Province, the Midwest region of Korea.
    As of 2012, it is one of the most beautiful and convenient cities in Korea.
    Agricultural, urban, industrial and mountain regions are equally distributed in the city.
    Furthermore, the city has well-connected transportation. It takes just about 1 hour to get to Seoul.
    Its road networks connect various roads such as Gyeongbu and Seohaean expressways.
    The population of the city has been rapidly increasing because of its convenient transportation.
    I like my city all the better because it has beautiful mountains such as Mt. Se-Bong, Gundal, Chorok, Chelbo and Ssangbong. The landscape seen from the mountains is green and beautiful.
    Especially, Mt. Gundal located in the central part of the city is the highest in Hawseong. This mountain has always been renowned for its cleanness and lack of pollution. On a clear day, you can see many beautiful islands in the West Sea and even Inchen.
    Also, there are many natural monument including a cuckoo, which is the 324th natural monument of Korea and a woodpecker.
    Recently, Hawseong city is promoting a number of development plans. So, I'm really worried about destruction of ecosystem.
    Thank you.
    Last edited by ddablo; 13-Nov-2012 at 15:00.

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