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    Default Correct sentence?

    If he becomes released after 21 years, how is that fair to all his victims and also family of the victims?

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    Default Re: Correct sentence?

    If he is released after 21 years, how is that fair to all his victims or the families of the victims?
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    Default Re: Correct sentence?

    Or even "...all his victims and their families."
    I'm not a teacher, but I write for a living. Please don't ask me about 2nd conditionals, but I'm a safe bet for what reads well in (American) English.

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