Zorjay
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Can you please correct this revew I wrote to practice for the first certificate exam? It is about the last computer game I played. (about 180 words)
World of Warcraft is a worldwide well-known computer game, which counts over 10 million players.
It made its first steps on the marketplace eight years ago and from then on, its players number increased more and more until last year when its creators -the Blizzard corporation- had launched a new expansion. It was considered the worst expansion World of Warcraft had ever known.
At any rate, since it is an online game, the community behaviour is as relevant as the originality of the game itself to keep players playing: you never know what kind of person you may find in it.
What is most likely, though, is the chance to deal with adults because, unlike almost any other game, it has to be payed monthly.
However, it is nothing more than the typical MMORPG in which you create your character, complete the quests you are asked to and fight other players, but it has something undescribable which keeps players playing.
After all it is worth to play,but make sure you like it before you pay for it.
World of Warcraft is a worldwide well-known computer game, which counts over 10 million players.
It made its first steps on the marketplace eight years ago and from then on, its players number increased more and more until last year when its creators -the Blizzard corporation- had launched a new expansion. It was considered the worst expansion World of Warcraft had ever known.
At any rate, since it is an online game, the community behaviour is as relevant as the originality of the game itself to keep players playing: you never know what kind of person you may find in it.
What is most likely, though, is the chance to deal with adults because, unlike almost any other game, it has to be payed monthly.
However, it is nothing more than the typical MMORPG in which you create your character, complete the quests you are asked to and fight other players, but it has something undescribable which keeps players playing.
After all it is worth to play,but make sure you like it before you pay for it.