Please refine this sentence

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While others were saying it, we were building it.
40 years of trust.
 

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While others were saying it, we were building it.
40 years of trust.

You have posted two sentences. Well, you have posted one full sentence and a fragment, which I assume is some kind of motto or slogan.
When you say "refine", what are you looking for?
 

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I just want to know if there is any other better way to write the same sentences keeping the essence of the meaning same

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They are fine as they are for advertising or promotion.
 
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