Please help me check the following thank letter.
I would like to express my appreciation to LiveABC for giving us a warm reception on July 6, 2012. It was an educational, informative visit which enabled us to increase our knowledge and allowed us to broaden our view. After the visit, students were required to write their thoughts in paragraphs. I didn’t finish marking corrections these homework until yesterday. So I select three pieces of paragraph writing which had been revised by me and mail them to LiveABC as a feedback. Please give us advice and corrections.
Last edited by Ashiuhto; 21-Nov-2012 at 03:16.