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    business e-mail - please correct

    I have to write a semi-formal business e-mail. Can you please help me to correct these sentences:

    I think that the idea of a meeting is good. (If someone suggests to hold a business meeting and you agree with it)

    I suggest (that) the meeting to be (held) in .... (Less formal but still correct and polite).

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    Re: business e-mail - please correct

    Check your PM.


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    Re: business e-mail - please correct

    Quote Originally Posted by lazybear
    I think that the idea of a meeting is good. (If someone suggests to hold a business meeting and you agree with it)
    I suggest (that) the meeting to be (held) in .... (Less formal but still correct and polite).
    All the sentences you suggest are perfectly good English for an e-mail. However, "If someone suggests to hold a business meeting and you agree with it" would be better written as, "If someone suggests holding a business meeting and you agree with it."

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