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    ... more convincing than once it did / it did once / it once did

    In the sentence below, the position of the word "once" does not seem right. The phrase sounds archaic to my ears. Is it correct, or is "than it did once" or "than it once did" better?

    The Party's claim to now be Labour's main challenger in the North of England seems far more convincing than once it did.

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    Re: ... more convincing than once it did / it did once / it once did

    Quote Originally Posted by GrammerCheckar View Post
    In the sentence below, the position of the word "once" does not seem right. The phrase sounds archaic to my ears. Is it correct, or is "than it did once" or "than it once did" better?

    The Party's claim to now be Labour's main challenger in the North of England seems far more convincing than once it did.
    Yes, it sounds odd to me too.

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    Re: ... more convincing than once it did / it did once / it once did

    It's not wrong, though.

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    Re: ... more convincing than once it did / it did once / it once did

    It's unusual but not wrong. You would see "than it once did" more often.
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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    Re: ... more convincing than once it did / it did once / it once did

    I think the writer may be attempting a flowery flourish with the word order to give the change a greater emphasis.

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