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    TheShadow is offline Member
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    Please correct to make it sound better

    Hi,


    "When it rains my mailbox gets wet and causing all my letters to get wet and running the ink of the letters"

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    Gillnetter is offline Key Member
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    Re: Please correct to make it sound better

    Quote Originally Posted by TheShadow View Post
    Hi,


    "When it rains my mailbox gets wet and causing (causes) all my letters to get wet and running (Move to the end of the sentence and use the infinitive form) makes the ink of the letters"

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    emsr2d2 is offline Moderator
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    Re: Please correct to make it sound better

    After we've fixed your sentence, I think you should get someone to fix your mailbox!
    Remember - correct capitalisation, punctuation and spacing make posts much easier to read.

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